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Post by Pure Original on Jun 1, 2008 19:57:16 GMT -6
If it isn't any of a bother could I get some feedback on my return RP. Strength's and Weeknesses etc
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Post by Doug Gavelon on Jun 1, 2008 21:10:55 GMT -6
I thought it was pretty good. The first half's pacing was top notch but the promo itself needs a bit more spacing. Like a little bird once told me (Franky, lol) is Chris just sitting there the entire time he's speaking or is he going through several movements? Besides that, some pretty good work.  |
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Post by Pure Original on Jun 2, 2008 18:49:08 GMT -6
Thanks for the critic. I'll have to work on adding more details to my RP's.
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Post by Davey "The Savior" Boone on Jun 7, 2008 13:19:07 GMT -6
Great roleplay, but I'm just glad you've decided to come back and I hope you stick around for a long time to come!
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