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Post by Pure Original on Jun 4, 2008 20:29:02 GMT -6
If it's no problem
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Post by Alexander Rose on Jun 5, 2008 4:57:17 GMT -6
I liked it a lot- it flowed well, and the scene transitions worked nicely.
The only thing I offer, and I know it's tough for the opening RP, but give a little more to the solo promo cutting about Doug. The back and forth between Sinclair and Pelf worked well, but the solo Sinclair promo didn't give too much, and it made it seem like Sinclair needs a supporting cast.
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