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Post by "K-OS" Karl O'Sullivan on Sept 2, 2008 3:34:48 GMT -6
That damn virus didn't give me much time to work on something for the show this week. I still hope to get another up before the deadline. So. What do you think? Thanks guys.  |
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Post by Jeffrey Hollywood on Sept 2, 2008 9:54:31 GMT -6
It was alright, would have liked to of seen more talk about the match itself and ur opponents. I'm not sure how that rp really helped ur character much either, we didn't really learn anything about Karl, just saw him have a cab ride that went bad.
My suggestion, focus more on the match itself, while still doing character development. You seemed more set on the Bettie Lee thing than the match. Got to watch where your focus of the rp is.
that's my two cents.
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Post by Doug Gavelon on Sept 2, 2008 15:02:27 GMT -6
I fully agree with Adam on this one. The length is great but you're essentially talking about nothing. I don't think you mentioned H or Alex Crowe by name once and not having Karl stand up to that other driver just makes him come off as weak, imo. I know I'm being brutally honest but that rp just really didn't work for me and needs vast improvement.
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